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Enrollment for <<Siobhan>> {{Alyssa}} <<O'Mahony>>
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PostPosted: Tue Mar 09, 2010 11:46 pm 
Siobhan Alyssa O'Mahony

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About y o u

First Name Only: Steven
Nickname(s):Steve
Legal Age: 16
Country: Australia
RP Experience: Not much. But one can always learn.

How Did You Find Us?: Watching my friend Role Play during class on your site, and I was interested. So she helped me sign up, apply for a character etc. etc.

Your c h a r a c t e r

Celebrity Claim:Kristen Prout
Character's Name:Siobhan
Character's Nickname(s):Alyssa
Gender:Female
Physical Age:17 or 18
Actual Age:187 years of age
Species:Vampire
Good/Bad Vamp?: If by drinking Human blood, then yes.
Coven/Pack:She belongs to the Irish Coven
Sexual Orientation:Straight
Relationship Status:Married, to her mate, Liam


Their f a m i l y


HUMAN FAMILY LIFE:
To say Siobhan's human life was uneventful was a lie and as far from the truth as could be possible.. She comes from a strictly Irish family, and, as some are, her family was quite big. She, being one of three middle children, wasn't treated higher, or lower than that of her siblings. In her family, there was here Mama, what beauty and sight! Her mama went by the name of Celeste. Siobhan had inherited her Mama's brilliant blonde hair, and in human form, he brilliant, sapphire blue, large eyes. Her Papa. A strong man, indeed, if there were any. He was largely built, but, not in a bad way, his muscles always made the heads of other women turn in shame of their men, and the men bow their heads that they were not like that. He went by the name of Alexander. The only thing Siobhan had inherited from her Papa was, in her human life, her strength (for her papa was a man of great strength), her defiance for the laws of the human world and her temperament.
When the parents were killed, all children were taken in by their “father”, Rolan.

Siobhan always related easier to her siblings, than anyone else in the world. Her eldest sister, Lacei, was always the leader. Always, never a follower, but no matter how hard Siobhan tried, she could never achieve the same grace and poise as Lacei. Next in the line of siblings was Siobhan's Eldest brother, and also Lacei's twin brother, Nikolais. He was trustworthy until the day he left for the new country. They received news two years after he left, that he had been killed as a bystander in a gang shooting. It broke Lacei's heart, seeing that they were so close. Her elder sister by 10 months, Brittany, was more of a rebellious child, she was in to drinking when shouldn't have, and eventually, she died, at the age of 15, when Siobhan was only 14 years old. The younger siblings were Kaeli and Christian. They were the other set of twins in their family. Except, they were so much younger than Lacei, Nikolais, Brittany and Siobhan. These two were merely children in comparison to the rest of the family. They died of PNEUMONIA when they were 9 years old. It was such a shock for their family, and their community. Many shocks followed, Lacei died of suicide at 19, by slit wrists. Siobhan ran out after that.

VAMPIRIC LIFE

Siobhan's Human life ended on December 6th, 1823. Her Maker disappeared soon thereafter. His name was Raoul. Raoul, along with Siobhan, were a very uncivil couple. But, they were never really a couple. Per se. more of a must-live-together-or-die kind of pairing. It wasn’t lively, it wasn’t fair, it was nothing. It was not until Siobhan met Liam that she believed that she may have a future, in her previous life, and this one. Maggie came in to the picture around 1908. It was revealed in the process that Siobhan has a Gift. It is to influence the way of a situation, though she herself believes that she has no Gift.


Their h i s t o r y

Being a child, and a daughter of an Irish family, Siobhan was expected to be great. To be prim. To be proper. Her mind was something upon fairy tales, fantasies and what-if's. Her father did not appreciate it too much. He loathed the idea that men had written things, produced the idea of things beyond what he was taught: God. Siobhan's family, being Irish in the early 1800's, meant they were also Christian. In 1817, Siobhan's family was in turmoil. Her father, how ever strict he seemed, he love his children genuinely, but he kept them on a tight leash, Siobhan especially. Siobhan, it seems, wasn't abused, well, at least not with her birth parents. Her life was turned upside down at he age of 12, when her father was shot to death in a local robbery at a bank where he had gone to get their money, so they could buy new clothes. Soon thereafter, Siobhan's mother, Celeste, was killed in a horrible STABBING ATTACK by an unknown killer, but, it was thought to be a conspiracy, because clearly, it was too soon after Alexander O'Mahony's murder. Though the Law never found out who did, the children knew who did it. Because the killer became their “Father” in retrospect. Siobhan feared for her life, for the lives of Lacei, Nikolais, Kaeli and Christian and Brittany.

Rolan had been a part of the O'Mahony clans lives when they were tiny children, but he was disowned by the O'Mahony parents, because they adopted him when he was young, seeing he was a small child. But when Lacei and Nikolais came in to the picture, he became bad-tempered and began terrorizing the young twins. That is how he was disowned, and when he heard of the deaths of the Celeste and Alexander O'Mahony, he set out to gain control of the children of this family, because he felt he was entitled to the children.

Rolan was particularly abusive.
He came in to the care of the O'Mahony siblings through a stringent court case to find them placement, so they'd have a stable home. Little did they know about Rolan's history.
Siobhan, sad to say, was the worst off out of everyone. She was continually beat, and abused, both physically and mentally. Rolan tried to get to the younger children, Brittany, Kaeli and Christian. He got to Brittany, hence her drug addiction, and alcohol abuse.
Whilst Kaeli and Christian always hid when Rolan was on a rampage. In the Summer of 1820, Brittany, aged 15, died. She apparently had a drug overdose, but Siobhan had heard whispers of that Rolan may have killed Brittany. It scared the children. They feared, they were planning to escape, but things did not work as they thought. Pretty soon after the death of Brittany, twins Kaeli and Christian both got pnemonia, and within the month, their lives were squeezed out of their little bodies. Siobhan, Lacei and Nikolais all mourned for their lost parents, lost siblings. As if their losses weren't enough, Rolan had it in his mind that they were “committing the sins of Lucifer”.
Months passed by for Siobhan, and her life went from bad to worse, including Nikolais walking out when he had enough, stating he was going to the new world to “seek help”. This was all within the year of 1820 -1821. In the beginning of they year of 1822, it reached Lacei and Siobhan that Nikolais was dead. That he had been killed as an innocent bystander in a gang shooting. Rolan blamed Lacei and Siobhan for the death f their parents, their sister, their brothers. For everything.

Eventually, Lacei couldn't handle it. This was in the winter of 1823, and Lacei killed herself, Siobhan fearing she would soon succumb to the same fate as the rest of her family, and now being of legal age, fled from the clutches of Rolan, living off of the land, until she met Raoul, who she hated, because he reminded her so much of Rolan, but she stuck with him, until, he eventually turned her, then left her, for he was solitary. To this day, Siobhan does not know whether he is alive.


Their a p p e a r a n c e

Siobhan has strongly Irish accented features. She has large crimson eyes, surrounded by black eyelashes that needn't the help of any material items, but she still deems it necessary, to make herself presentable to the world, or so she thinks. Siobhan possesses beautiful, naturally blonde hair, pale skin and soft lips. Sheseems to think that she isn't beautiful, little does she know she is sought after by many, many human males, who see her wherever she goes. She cannot go anywhere without attracting attention. Siobhan, despite her beliefs, has a lovely body. She isn't too thin, but she isn't bad looking. Her hips come out a bit after her ribs, her legs are strong, mostly from running from the things that frightened her when she was human.

Siobhan has a tattoo that no one knows of, that no one can see. On her tailbone she has the tattoo of a holy trinity and a dove entwined together. She got that done before she was turned, so there it is, but hardly anyone has seen it, only her elder sister. She has five scars. No more, no less. She has one from the Vampire venom, on the left side of her throat, where she was bitten. The second is on the left shoulder blade, it is from when Rolan tried to stab her with a knife in one of his drunken stupors. The Third, is on her stomach, from when she was little, and when she came down with the chicken pox, and scratched there too much. Fourth is from when Brittany, Lacei, Kaeli and Siobhan were climbing a tree, and Siobhan slipped and fell on to a sharp rock. This certain scar stretches from her right shoulder blade to her left hip. She was ten at the time. The fifth and final comes from the day of Lacei's suicide. The knife, when it dropped out of Lacei's hand, cut Siobhan deeply, but at the time, she didn't think anything of it. Siobhan now thinks of it as a reminder her sister left on her, as if she knew that Siobhan would get turned, or at least, hoped.


Their p e r s o n a l i t y

To put it in one word, Siobhan is feisty. She does not take any BS from anyone. Aforementioned, Siobhan is headstrong, just like her Papa, and beautifully poised, like her Mama.
To say it simply, Siobhan isn't someone you can just tell what to do, and, even she herself believes it is partially because of the way that she lived after her parents death.

Siobhan has majority pet peeves, which includes, (strangely), Bare feet, abusive men, argumentative situations, and she absolutely hates it when someone hurts someone she loves. It breaks her heart, to say so, that somebody can just hurt another soul, and think that they can just walk away. Some of Siobhan's likes are families that stick together, Cliffs edges at sunset, beach walks.

Something that makes her tick really bad, is the fact that, in this day and age, people cannot seem to let the arguments die, and they cannot bury the hatchet. She has seen too many fights, too many arguments, that all turn sour in the end, most of them ending in the loss of an innocent human life. It kills her not to intervene. But, she stays quiet, stands in the shadows, feeling out-of-place, lonely and cut deep, each time she witnesses someone lose their life, or lose the life of someone they hold dear, just because of something stupid.


Your p r o m i s e

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Your s a m p l e

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Standing against the cold wind, Siobhan sighed. She wished, with all her heart, that she could see Nikolais and Lacei again. She dearly missed her siblings that she looked up to, even idolized to an extent. In her mind she could hear them, their voice yelling to her, full of joy, of life, of love.

Siobhan! Sio! Sio! Come play with us, Sio! You know Papa will not find out! He needn't know that you threw in the snow, that you jumped on ice, that you, god forbid, fell in the water! Sio, we love you, and we want you to play!

If Siobhan could, even the slightest possibility, cry, she would have been weeping at the memory of her brothers and sisters. It was long before the death of Kaeli and Christian. Long before Nikolais' leaving. Long before Lacei's heart break. Long before the suicide, pain, angst and darkness of her family.
Though they had not lived for a long, long time now, Siobhan still missed them badly, like each time she thought of them, another hole would rip in her heart, never healing until she would see them again.

Siobhan still had memories of Lacei's suicide. It was a dark dreary day, the day she did it.

*flash back*

Holding the freshly-sharpened kitchen butchers knife to hover just above the crucial veins on her left wrist, Lacei uttered a soft cry, as she thought of all the pain her family had been through in these past days, weeks, months, and years. As was lost, thinking of her brothers face, the knife was knocked on to the floor with a cluttering noise.

“Lacei...Why? Why must the people we care about the most, cause us the most pain?” Siobhan whispered in to her sisters ear, as Lacei collapsed against her younger sisters chest, and cried.

“Sio. Sio. Sio....Why? Why did they have to leave us? Don't they realize the pain they've caused us?” Lacei said, her voice barely above a whisper, muffled by the tears she was trying not to choke on.

Heavy foot steps came towards the locked door, alerting both Siobhan and Lacei of the presence of others.
“Lacei? Siobhan?” came the voice they both feared, the voice of their “supposed” Father, Rolan. “What the hell is going on in there?! Open this door!” he continued, banging on the door.

“I love you, Siobhan......” Lacei whispered, as she grabbed the knife, and cut a gash in her left wrist, letting the blood pour out.

Slamming the door open, Rolan saw the scene, as Siobhan ran from the room, wanting to get towels, but it was too late, she already knew that, so she kept on running, she had no one left now.

*end flash back*

“Oh, Lacei....” Siobhan sighed as she walked around the tree, and headed in to the town of Forks, hoping she would find someone she could talk to about everything. Hoping she could find someone that would understand her.


Last edited by Siobhan O'Mahony on Thu Mar 11, 2010 6:49 pm, edited 1 time in total.

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Re: Enrollment for <<Siobhan>> {{Alyssa}} <<O'Mahony>>
PostPosted: Wed Mar 10, 2010 1:58 am 
Hello Steve!

Thank you for applying, and welcome to Bittersweet Forever! Your application is quite well down, however, there are a few things I would like you to take a look at before I accept this application.

To start...

  • Automobiles weren't invented until the late 1800s (the first automobile recognizable as similar to those of today was invented in 1884 in Germany), and didn't become practical until well into the 1900s (think 1903 to the 1920 era, and later). Thus, it doesn't make much sense for Siobhan's mother to die in a car crash.
  • You switch cause of death for the younger two? First the flu, then pneumonia.
  • Just need clarification: is Rolan a relative? How did he become involved in their lives? Why did he want the O'Mahony clan so badly, and why was he so abusive to them?
  • In Breaking Dawn, Carlisle suggests that Siobhan does in fact have a power: she can influence events by willing for her desired outcome to happen. This seems to be proven by the fact that the Volturi do not attack/destroy the Cullen coven, but either way, you could definitely involve that in your profile.

That's it. Like I said, little things. If you could edit the few areas that don't match up, then we can have you on your way and roleplaying ASAP. Thanks again!

-Kayleigh
(On behalf of BSF staff).


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